
The private self meets advancing age in two poems by dl mattila.
cocoon . . .
it’s what you don’t see
that defines me
In an age of endless social media confessions, it is important to remember that our selves were not meant to be always – or even ever – broadcast to the world. So often the cocoon is viewed only as a symbol of the butterfly that is to emerge from it. But there is essential beauty in what is inside the cocoon, not just in what is about to come out of it. It commands our respect. If only we’d stop tweeting and blogging long enough to notice.
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advancing age
in my blind-spot
changing lanes
This sharp little poem leaves us on a cliff-hanger ending, even though Mother Nature has already spoiled the ending for us all. We don’t see age creeping up on ourselves until we try to shift our lives and run smack into it. But even though the younger driver may (really?) have the better reflexes, the older one has potentially more experience, more skill, and, as the character Evelyn Couch noted in the now classic film Fried Green Tomatoes, more insurance.
dl mattila is a lot of things.
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #4: Jennifer Hambrick presents and comments on dl matilla’s two haiku for the International Women’s Haiku Festival!
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I have enjoyed all of these posts, Jennifer, but find this one particularly good especially the poet’s bio. Short and succinct…she says it all in a few words. ~nan
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